CHILDREN AND THE TREE
Two children were playing in the garden, but looking at the forest and they wanted to walk and meet him, but soon felt lost. They sat crying beside a tree, the tree and asked: what happens? what do you do in my place?. john and Anna answered: we are lost. Do you know how to get out of here?. the tree said: You need to work in my place, you are obliged to clean the floor, racking leaves, water to irrigate the plants, and I could help.
They cleaned everything, and the tree kept his promise. children returned home, and told what had happened. Every day the children visited the forest, because they and the tree are friends.
Great imaginative story, can work really well as a bed time story.
ReplyDeleteI only wish if it was longer and had more details.
Also, I couldn't understand whom John and
Ann wanted to meet in the forest!
The drawings are really nice and give the reader a clear image of the story. It is interesting how the moral of the story falls far deeper than the letterly or shallow meaning of it, where it involves trust and earning freedom by accomplishing good deeds.
ReplyDeleteI think it would make a good children's story.
Thank you all for your comments. They are a great help to improve and deepen into the story and the language. I really appreciate your contribution and suggestions. Thanks again.
ReplyDeleteThank you Caliche for your wonderful illustrations and story ! We all enjoyed your story very much. You have many details in your story that are clearly shown through the pictures and your explanation of the story. It would be interesting to see how you could add more details to the story and give the reader a whole image of the story. You are very thoughtful, and we all appreciate your creativeness and hard work very much. Thank you :)
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